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Cuffs episode 1
Main Character Setting Overall Tone Appeal Jake Vickers- The gay rookie. PC Ryan Draper- Widower husband, Jake's partner and tutor. Jo Moffat- An investigator. Lonely with a dog. Having an affair with the Police Commissioner. Robert Vickers- Police Commissioner, wife dying from cancer. Felix Kane- Police investigator with a troubling personal life. Narrative Opens with Ryan battling a group of people antagonising nudists at a beach. Parallel editing, Jake becoming a police officer by his dad. Jake and Ryan get paired up, Ryan is the tutor. Jake is immediately open, says he's gay. First call, help a mentally ill suicidal drug addict. Jake does bad, shouts at the man. Ryan does good. Leave the addict at hospital alone, first mistake made by Ryan Racist is let out of prison and attacks an indian man. Father abducts his child due to family dispute. Ryan lectures Jake for saying "chill." Ryan shouts at a kid, we learn he's a father. Crazy shoplift...
5/9
ReplyDeleteA good first draft, well done. I particularly like the colours in your main image and masthead font choice. Targets:
1) Add a bar code.
2) Add a price, issue number and date in a small font (8pt or 10pt below the masthead or above the barcode).
3) Add more teaser stories.